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There are those lower than I that become the floor.

There are those higher who become the ceiling.

The better ones stand out, they are the furniture.

There are those equal to I, we are the walls that go unnoticed.
©2007-2009 ~jpopqueen26
:iconjpopqueen26:

Author's Comments

If you don't get this, you're a dim-witt.

If you do, then good for you.

If you think this is stupid...what the hell do you know?!



BTW, I hope I used proper English. And it's been a while since I put somethig up....damn school. Now you know what I do on my spare time.

For Yami: Fushi Yugi: Genbu Kaiden v.6 doesn't come out till February 2008... : | I think.

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:iconnicktheherbivore:
Awesome. I love it. You didn't need such a detailed explaination though. I'm gonna add this to my fav's.
:iconjpopqueen26:
thank you! : | yeah, but you know, some may not get it.... and thanks for the fave!

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Skinny-marinky-dinky-dink
Skinny-marinky-doo
I love you

I love you
in the morning and in the afternoon,
I love you in the evening and underneath the moon!

Skinny-marinky-dinky-dink
Skinny-marinky-doo
I love you
:iconelephantman5:
I like the concept.
The dumbing down of your meaning seems over complicated...the description shouldn't be so over explained.
Nice one!

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:iconkittytsukasa:
It's a wonderful poem, and yes, I caught onto the symbolism. I just really love how you compared everything, it's just so lovely.

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Vos estis furcifer!

"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
:iconrazor-kissed-wrists:
wow thats really good

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Turn look, look out and see
Do You see me? Cause I think I see You
:iconkirbyrocks:
Metaphors kick ass.
:iconccarcia3:
This is such a beautiful poem... your imagery, the core of the poem in the metaphors... it's brilliant, and totally perfect. It's wonderfully done; you are a great poet. I love it.

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A man is a fool not to put everything he has, at any given moment, into what he is creating.

- Frank Herbert
:iconjpopqueen26:
>.< thank you!

--
Skinny-marinky-dinky-dink
Skinny-marinky-doo
I love you

I love you
in the morning and in the afternoon,
I love you in the evening and underneath the moon!

Skinny-marinky-dinky-dink
Skinny-marinky-doo
I love you
:iconjpopqueen26:
thank you very much! ^___^

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Skinny-marinky-dinky-dink
Skinny-marinky-doo
I love you

I love you
in the morning and in the afternoon,
I love you in the evening and underneath the moon!

Skinny-marinky-dinky-dink
Skinny-marinky-doo
I love you

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